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Wren Avio

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You have asked for it so here it is Wrensthav's female form.

The legs need some work ^^;
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Vision:
This piece was supposed to show your male OC Wrensthav Aviovus as a female character and you did so very well.

Originality:
Any form of Wrensthav Aviovus Is Original hes a great OC, and come on his name is AWESOME! This is however the female version of the OC witch means it is not 100% original.

Technique:
This is where I act like my teacher.
Now I know your a writer but, COME ON WRENCH! You can do better I know you can I've seen it.
The main problem I see is anatomy, and there are tons of tricks with anatomy.
First off the eyes are TO BIG human eyes are as big as they are apart from each other, try to measure it on yourself.
Second are the shoulders, there a little to brad, and make her look like a football player.
Third is the breasts they seem unnatural, female breasts come get support from the upper chest and shoulders but on Wren Avio they seem to just sit there.
I know you have addressed the legs but the thing I see wrong with them is the shins being to small. The upper legs seem to be the right length and with.

Impact:
this would have had a higher score if it was not for the shoes, from what I gather, her outfit is supposed to be more fantasy than anything and the tennis shoes just kill the mood, so to speak.
Well I hope this helps Wrench!
See you in the chat room!